Wednesday, September 30, 2009

snow

free write challenge comparing a person to snow.


He is snow. Much loved, yet ice.
A trembling touch
He fits the palm of my red hand.

But he, is snow - and he crumbles
Under reckless weight
Of those who feel snow is a game

He is snow. Hardened, hollow
From a dark, cruel night
Quaking under a fragile moon.

He is snow, with a desire to be melted.
He couldn't be held
Long enough to be understood.

Fire and Ice could never co-exist
Yet how they loved
And longed to be more permanent.

1 comment:

bobJuan said...

you are another reason Al Gore created the internet. melting. giving. it's what we do sometimes. certainly we melt on the edge of bullshit's fire. it's all we got. the light in the dark comes from our eyes.